I don't like it.
I think an instrumental would be a lot.
Also, the vocals at :28-:32 sound rushed, and horrible. It had potential, but I believe you over thought this one, and you fucked it up.
oh gee how constructive =)
any suggestions as far as how I can FIX it then? lol
At 2:13, is that the sound from the Droid commercials?
Lmao, now that you mention it, that does sound similar, huh? It's actually a relatively simple sawtooth synth, but with like 10000 different effects.
I've been listening to this song for like 3 hours.
Never even realized it was still playing! This song is the best of of everything you've done, in my opinion. You have a talent for these kinds of things. We would never forgive you if you stopped doing what you do. The piano sounds are freaking amazing, the little "In the sky, the sky.." Parts just add to this songs amazing. I would have sex with this song, and make little song babies, and listen to them all day. O_O
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